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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Shipped to a special house known for it's room under the stairs known for a jealous ritual of affairs kept under lock and key disallowed to be free... Sent with a special mark a mark of wizardry to evolve and mysteries of evil to solve in cahoots with peers to sweep... away with the decadent heap Was it you who learned to ride a broom was it you who vanished from your room under the stairs, kept with no supper a rogue, imposter or david copper.. Come to share your adventure with me am still locked up in my home tree put a mark of wizardry on my forehead to venture from this world of the dead... [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-23-2003 11:01 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
chilling write my friend |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Martin: goodness this one creeped me out awesome write xxoo |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Raph, fightened?...it's just the final rhyme..I was wondering about changing the last word..but it does seem to summerize that state of sleep so many of us are in. Littlewing, definitely not your average love poem man 
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
No not the line in itself but as you said the state that many are in..i find it chiiling how many are locked in things both internal and external..ok i'm probably not making much sense so I'm off..great writing as usual. go habs go..grins |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda glad you're not the average love poem man  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Raph, you're not off at all, were all kind of locked in...hope the Als can do what the Expos haven't Passing, pleaseure to read that  [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-24-2003 07:28 AM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Spookalishicous lol ARCTIC WIND |
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