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inner sanctuary (1,000) |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I stare up from My coffee cup Only to find you avoiding me I stare straight Into the void Between waking dreams And nightmares I burn my tongue As you put down the sunday paper I quickly focus my energy on the scrambled eggs at the end of my fork I feel your thoughts weighing me down And your eyes crawling over my skin I feel you taking a sip Of the bitter coffee I hope it burns a hole Through your very existence Sometimes I wish you could Read my lips You claimed a thousand times before You could But I laugh When this sugar tastes better Than your kisses ever did If only you knew That this is going to be Your last cup of morning coffee With me sitting here being seen and not heard And the last taste of my salty cries In the middle of the night And the last time I'll ever let you enter my inner sanctuary If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (06-23-2003 04:13 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris? I think you said it for all of us here . . . . lots of hugs your way xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Excellent write! ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
congrats on 1000! strong words from a strong woman. enjoyed |
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rapturedmist Junior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 30USA |
This conveys some strong emotions...especially the last line 'And the last time I'll ever let you enter my inner sanctuary'. Koodo's to you -RM |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Forgot to say congrats on the 1000th post!  |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
grins..thank you all If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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papabear Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 102Atlanta, GA |
I just had to stop and give you a big bear hug… That was amazing… Very well done… |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
papabear awww thank you!!! If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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nobody Junior Member
since 2003-05-19
Posts 43 |
wow thats such a great poem and i can kinda relate with it...good job *mwah* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A strong write, Ceinwyn. Congratulations on your 1000th post! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
the hour of power within these words...and congrats on the 1K milestone.... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very powerful write, I felt I was sitting there with you .... expressing thoughts that would be felt like arrows thrown into his heart. Love, Margherita |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*blushes* you guys are too kind  thank you I could most definately get lost in this sea of blue *whispers even tho I don't know how to swim* but least I know I have all you to make sure I don't drown...If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (06-23-2003 06:32 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you do too know how to swim missy I will come there and get you . . . shush and Congrats! Sorry I forgot to say it up there xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I fyou ever doubt your ability again I'll smack you. What an awesome write..congrats millenia girl |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
1000 posts! Im about 1/10 there lol Great poem Very empowering Joe |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 Congrats on your 1000th!Do I ever know what you are writing about here! Stand strong! |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
lol raph is that a threat or a promise ohh thanx joe and passing  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Congrats Dear Cein! ARCTIC WIND |
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