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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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The hours carved our locked limbs like puzzle played by and were gone like missing piece. [This message has been edited by gemjop (06-23-2003 10:39 AM).] |
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Bonfirelight Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 85London, England |
that conjours up all sorts of imagery. works well |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
like puzzle played by and were gone Few words, MUCH told! Kept my imagination and my mind guessing. A well penned and rather illusive write! Blessings! Shirl 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
ambiguous writing, but methinks i understand..few words but volumes said |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bless you gemma . . . I do understand xxoo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Awesome. Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
thankyou my lovelies. i didnt particularly feel at all comfortable with this one. got so much to say, but it wont come out. grrrr.  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
You have a way with words Gem! I always like to read your pieces  ARCTIC WIND |
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