Open Poetry #27 |
Paradigm, Mirrored |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Paradigm Mirrored Reflections cast come back at one a silver spoon inverts a face a calm still lake shines one in grace a clear glass shall cast reflection but silvered glass? Introspection To look beyond glassed-in mystery to look behind the back of thee to see within where beauty lies a clear glass still casts inspection but silvered glass? Paused reflection. The most excellent mirror, if truth be told are when my love's eyes are in my behold 01.15.01 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your love's eyes reflect the beauty that is you... Love & Light, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You don't know how much I needed to read this today... Smiling at you and whispering...'thank you'. ~Hugs, Hip-Sis~ |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
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indeed, you speak the truth. enjoyed |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
They say the eyes mirror the soul...your words reflect truth that dwells in the heart.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Reflections and refractions abound in here. *squinting* Penned with a prism. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
The most excellent mirror, if truth be told are when my love's eyes are in my behold I love this, K. To see ourselves through the eyes of someone who loves us. Yes, it a wonderful mirror indeed. Patricia |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
DAMN! the high-pitched tone of a perfect pome love this |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
LoTo look beyond glassed-in mystery ved this write especially that line breathtakingly beautiful write...thank you for sharing. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
The most excellent mirror, if truth be told are when my love's eyes are in my behold This is SO true, Karilea. Thank you, my friend. Hugs Ethel (Psssttt!!! How's the novel coming along?) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The most excellent mirror, if truth be told are when my love's eyes are in my behold says it all, Karilea hugs M |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So beautifully true, Karilea! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Beauty is truth, truth beauty.... You show both here. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This poem definitely reflects the beauty in you and your poetic pen Sunshine! ~ Favorite line here "The most excellent mirror, if truth be told are when my love's eyes are in my behold........" to you ARCTIC WIND |
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