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somethinginyoursocks Junior Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 28IN, the U.S. of A. |
Is the Dead any more dead without a carven tombstone? Stone and steel aren't forever just as memories seldom die. But when the stone is broken, the man behind the cement mask, in piece, can finally lie. The sweet riches of torment are finally put to slumber as pain washes away as life spirals away in the inevitable corkscrew of a memory -I don't need a signature- |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This touched my heart for some very personal reasons. So personal in fact, I dunno what to say. But I wanted to let you know that I read, and enjoyed. And? Love the name too. Kind of sums up MY effect on people too.  Thanks for the read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Dang! How'd I miss you!? Well, welcome to Passions!  Wonderful write, love the screen name, and the signature line! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Very nice. I think you may've made a tiny mistake though. Peace, instead of peice? Anyways, I love the s/n! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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somethinginyoursocks Junior Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 28IN, the U.S. of A. |
Yes, I've actually been a member for quite some time. But, my computer was unreliable for a long time and I didn't write for a long period of time. But, I'm back. For those of you who think "piece" is a typo, it really isn't. But, I blame my lack of skill that doesn't make it obvious. -I don't need a signature- |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed your diddy full of thoughts!  ARCTIC WIND |
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