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garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-06-23 11:12 AM

~~**~~
Underneath Velvet Skies
we look up to the bright stars
sparkling as clear as diamonds

We gaze up at them
as we lie on the grass
on top of our soft blanket

The night is very peaceful as we listen
quietly to the music from the radio
playing very softly

Ocassionally we hear the fish
jumping in the water, or a
cricket by the river

Then our song comes on the radio
wih the words flowing through
and we again whisper in each other's ear

"Do you know that I love you
as much as the whole world
and back around again"

We get up and sway to the music
slowly dancing under the stars
in the moonlit night by the beautiful river
~~**~~

Revisited---because I needed to again

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-23-2003 11:17 AM).]

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

1 posted 2003-06-23 11:16 AM

We get up and sway to the music
slowly dancing under the stars
in the moonlit night by the beautiful river

Fantastically romantic.
Huggles, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-06-23 11:20 AM

Thank you, Marti. You don't know how much I appreciate you reading and replying to my poem.
Thank you, again.

Hugs

Ethel

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2003-06-23 11:34 AM

beautiful and romantic Ethel
loved those settings neath the moon and stars
Hope

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-06-23 11:36 AM

Thank you, Hope. I'm glad that
you liked it.

Hugs

Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-23-2003 06:51 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-06-23 12:38 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Awwwwwwww, I remember this gem so much, dearest friend, and I dream soooooooo much of having my dream girl near me and playing our favorite song together too on a beach blanket! (smiles) This is a beautiful poem to add to your magical library, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!