Open Poetry #27 |
Blocked Up |
Bonfirelight Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 85London, England |
tick tock tick tock the words are locked blank page rage at being mocked by the screaming silence this cage this sheet And dreading a repeat defeat by this paper So smugly incomplete So sink another drink to think about how this ink could form the missing link the well from which the words could merge to form a spark to end this dirge no joy. no luck. the pages mock and still the block tick tock tick tock |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not so blocked...Welcome to Passions! If you think you're challenged by a moody muse, well then, we can introduce you around and you can show your muse JUST what happens when you get to Passions...so I hope you're in for a pleasant sit back and read, share, visit our various forums....and just enjoy! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Writer's block? Methinks NOT! If 'twere there, you sure cracked through it with THIS creative, clever, well penned write! WELCOME! Blessings! Shirl 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done. welcoem to passions |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Yep I know the feeling....welcome to our world |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh my gosh, I think we all have this feeling every now and then, but with your golden heart, you are bound to have poetry forever fill your soul, yay! This is a marvelous debut, I love it! Welcome to passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I ca't wait to read more of your fabulous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
enjoyed and welcome If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at your muse, is she related to mine? Welcome to Passions! Muses are fickle. Best to sit back and read, reply, and have some fun until that creature coughs up another poetic post. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Clever opening! Welcome to da'joint! Kraw' |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. I liked the 'sing song' quality of this poem. And I HATE it when I get writers block!!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bonfire: Welcome to PIP! I love your writing . . . heheh sounds familiar You will love it here xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I know you will love it here! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome! I know what you write about all too well! |
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Rose Petal Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 52WVa. USA |
Welcome to passions! you write well! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WELCOME TO PIP! ARCTIC WIND |
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