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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-06-23 09:23 AM

Time In Reminisce

I looked over my shoulder
watching from a distance,
remembering that day when
I learned a lesson of the heart.

Those first impressions
twisted fantasies, were
a gift to shadow me
from that moment on.

The strength of your hold
offered me acceptance,
as I allowed that first dance
to sweep me off my feet.

I remember following your movements pressed,
yielding to the dips and turns,
subjecting myself to more of you,
my heart pounding in deliverance.

Picture perfect back then,
alone and without now,
except for the touches of you
remaining for eyes to soak in,
to flood my heart with the abundance
of caring, that remains despite.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-06-23 09:33 AM

"twisted fantasies, were
a gift to shadow me
from that moment on."

Yes..I know those shadows...I have been working very hard to banish them...

Very nice work.

Susan

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-06-23 09:42 AM

to flood my heart with the abundance
of caring, that remains despite.

Oh, my yes. Hmmm.....
Straight from your heart once again dear poetess. hugs, Chris

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-06-23 02:15 PM

sometimes those shadows Susan, aren't such a bad thing...I don't mind the memories good or bad. They are each a learning experience.
Hugs
M

Sometimes Chris, I wish I didn't have that "caring" gene...
But I am who I am...
~sighing~
M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-24 06:13 AM

you're a light!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2003-06-24 09:24 AM

Hi Maureen, Once again you speak words that fill my heart with my own memories and longngs. You do this so well.
Sandra

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2003-06-24 09:38 AM

"The strength of your hold
offered me acceptance,
as I allowed that first dance
to sweep me off my feet."

yes...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-06-24 10:06 AM

Hi there Dixie *s you make me smile...

M

So nice to see you Sandra. I hope you are feeling well. I havemissed you on here.
hugs
M

Good morning SEA...I have decided to look upon the good in life, that I have shared with others and not to dwell on the sad. It's not always easy, but the anxiety lessens each day.
Thank you for stopping by.
M

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-08-13 02:01 PM

Maureen, You write with such poetic filled emotions! Wonderful Penning

ARCTIC WIND

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2008-08-13 06:59 PM

~smiling~ another thank you, AW

M

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