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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-06-23 08:55 AM

These thoughts assail my thinking
The yesterday that I didn’t really want to be in,
Those events were too many
I looked for a way to help but there wasn’t any,
The event thoughts keep returning
I try to think around the past emotional burning
Trying to be more positive,
And not too worrisome of how you’ve come to live,
To accept things for how they are
For things have progressed and progressed far
And all my thoughts don’t matter
While the situation slowly becomes sadder.

Gloom

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

1 posted 2003-06-23 09:01 AM

~~The yesterday that I didn’t really want to be in~~

oooooh yes.

always love it when you stop by. love reading your thoughts, and how they often match mine.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-06-23 09:03 AM

mine too

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2003-06-23 09:04 AM

excellent conveyance of helplessness and despair...

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-07-01 11:26 AM

Your rambling last week fits my day today...

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2003-07-01 11:39 AM

glommy one...you do know how i LOVE your writing !!!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2003-07-01 12:08 PM

Dear Gloom, Everytime I read one of your sad writes....I have to run and find something sweet to eat!! I'm going to be like a short, round, pumpkin with legs soon!! lol. I do enjoy your way with words. But...slip in a happy one now and then....just for the sake of my waistline!

hugs, Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-07-01 12:20 PM

Gloom, it was suggested over in poetry challenge that you and I perform a duet.

What do you think? Care to mix some gloom with sun and see what kind of haze we can create?

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