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luckyme9293
Junior Member

since 2003-07-01

Posts 24
tx

0 posted 2003-07-01 11:53 AM

She

Jealousy overcoming me,
I overlooked her
Lurking in the shadows,
A beautiful girl with a lost soul.
She never did anything to me,
But for some reason I despised her.
Was it because of who she befriended?
Not me, but him.
Its strange that such a beautiful soul
Can be masked
Only unleashed when one shows their true colors first.
There was something mysterious about her
Not her fair skin, or slim shape,
But her willingness to survive.
Put on this earth to be burdened
By people who don’t matter.
But she is the chosen one,
Selected carefully, to come out on top
To revolt, and make anything possible.
A creature that’s beauty and soul
Could make any man want,
And any women worried.
She speaks as if she doesn’t care,
But I can’t see why she doesn’t yern to live.
She punished by so many,
But loved by many more,
She’s gives confidence and makes you think you can survive,
Crying on the inside,
She wants to be released.
Anger and pain let out by the
Spoken word and her blood shed tears.
She’s here to lead us away
One day shell be glad she stayed
She is my will to live on
And I know longer despise her
She remains nameless, but she knows who she is.
Evil works for her and love stays in her hands.
God bless this girl,
Savior.

[This message has been edited by luckyme9293 (07-01-2003 07:20 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-07-01 12:05 PM

Welcome to Passions.
Interesting write...you will find good company here I think.
Would suggest a run through the grammer and spell check, to preserve the excellent intent of your well written works.
ThisDiamond

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2 posted 2003-07-01 12:18 PM

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