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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-06-12 11:57 AM

Pray into nights
Into light
Give us hope
LIve Into a home
Where there Is a heart
A hope to lIve
Don't gIve it up
So soon
You still have faith
you still have love
WIthin your heart
There Is a soul
A soul
A desire
GIve us love
Tonight
We have to live In It
GIve us hope
GIve us light
Give us night
Everyday
Bring us a new day
A new way
to our life
Give us hope

idleeyes86
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 64
Somewhere over the rainbow

1 posted 2003-06-12 12:11 PM

Even though I may have taken it the completely wrong way and you might write back saying it was just a lot of typo's but I liked the idea of the capital I's as for the poem as a whole gave me a nice warm feeling even but it didn't go over the top nicely written.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-06-12 12:13 PM

good write here, loved the capital I's

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-06-12 12:17 PM

Vandana:

this sounds like my daily prayer . . .

is lovely - good wishes to you
xxoo

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-06-12 12:23 PM

May each day be filled with hope and light.

Warm hugs,
Linda

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2003-06-12 01:00 PM

enjoyed

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-06-12 03:05 PM

I give you a thousand hopes...James

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

7 posted 2003-06-12 03:24 PM

Vandana, this poem was beautiful. you always make me smile.

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

8 posted 2003-06-12 03:25 PM

liked the poem liked the read good job

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2003-06-12 03:47 PM

Very nice vandana. Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

10 posted 2003-06-12 03:58 PM

Amen...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2003-06-12 03:58 PM

Yes Vandana, hope is not
too much
to ask for!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-06-14 05:41 PM

(sigh) Oh Vandana, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, may we pray each and every morning to the good Lord and know that we have His guidance consoling us each and every day! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this glimmers with light, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

13 posted 2003-06-14 05:45 PM

very nice,,,,

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2003-06-14 06:00 PM

Vandana, this is a really nice poem. Without hope what would we have? This is really good!!

Hugs

Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-14-2003 07:10 PM).]

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

15 posted 2008-02-02 12:07 PM

Lovely

ARCTIC WIND

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