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Open Poetry #27

Missing You

JingleBear
Member

since 2003-05-08

Posts 76
Pennsylvania, USA

0 posted 2003-06-11 04:31 PM

Her hand placed in yours
where mine used to be.
Her arms wrapped around you
where mine used to be.
Her giggles in your room
where mine used to be.
Your eyes staring into hers
where mine used to be.

Past memories are filled with the new,
I can only sit here without a clue.

So many steps I have retraced,
Only to remain replaced.

Moving on is not so easy
when there is another so sleazy.

Without a doubt,
The sad truth sticks out,
I cannot do without.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-11 04:33 PM

very nice write,, enjoyed...

QjQ

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-06-12 06:35 AM

This is good...James

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-01-31 12:56 PM

I like the Ending

"I can Not do Without..."

Very Much Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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