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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2003-06-12 12:20 PM



High into dreams
my soul awakened
singing love by
the fiery moon...delicious
wanting in the night.
My soul searching,
reaching for the heart
within its dreams. Elusive
as an airy sprite, the face
of he who claimed my soul,
who gave the love within...a voice.

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-12 12:37 PM


very nice write,,,

QjQ

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2003-06-12 12:43 PM


as an airy sprite, the face
of he who claimed my soul,
who gave the love within...a voice.

Love the sound of this!
Beautiful tone of voice you write with Ivy Rose~


garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-06-12 03:23 AM


Very beautiful, Rose....especially this...

the face
of he who claimed my soul,
who gave the love within...a voice


Hugs  
Ethel

Patricia
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4 posted 2003-06-12 07:55 AM


Elusive
as an airy sprite, the face
of he who claimed my soul,
who gave the love within...a voice

I am familar with the elusive.  He comes to capture your heart, but yet you cannot capture him.

This is beautiful.  And though your words remind me of him, the one I could not capture, the one who gave my love a voice, I am soothed today in thought that I have known his love.

Well done.

Patricia

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2003-06-12 10:12 AM


Ivy Rose - romance written from the soul. Lovely...

BC

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6 posted 2003-06-12 10:19 AM


May your song of dreams, become the song of your reality...  

Beautifully expressed, Ivy!

Luvin' hugs,
Linda

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7 posted 2003-06-12 10:23 AM


IvyRose~
Hi sweet poetess .. this is BEAUTIMOUS~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vandana
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8 posted 2003-06-12 12:04 PM


nice
passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2003-06-12 12:45 PM


beautiful!
Artic Wind
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10 posted 2008-01-31 03:42 PM


Beautiful Indeed, LOVE IT!

ARCTIC WIND

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