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WindSong
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since 2002-12-23
Posts 313
Long Island, New York
0 posted 2003-06-22 06:41 PM


Forever (I'll watch...)

Forever I'll watch the sun rise.
Forever I'll see you admist the summer breeze.
Forever I'll feel your tender heart scream it's love.

Never shall I forget those three
words you'd say to me all the time.
The three words that made me melt.
"I love you."

Forever I'll share memories with myself.
Forever I'll cry a river inside my body
that things couldn't be different.
Forever I'll remember you shining above me.

It's not hard to see that I love you and
forever I'll watch you move and forever
will I hug myself when the wind blows and
your mournful cry rushes through my ears.

Forever I'll watch the sun rise
Forever I'll see you amidst the summer breeze,
forever will I stand in the light of heavens
Forever will I swim in the ocean of love, watching you.


"Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown.

[This message has been edited by WindSong (06-22-2003 06:43 PM).]
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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
1 posted 2003-06-22 06:57 PM

life is indeed a miracle, gift...every single moment,,,thank you for knowing that and wishing you the great diamonds of passion flows through your soul....lovely words
WindSong
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since 2002-12-23
Posts 313
Long Island, New York
2 posted 2003-06-22 07:02 PM

Thank you...This place is awesome. I appreciate your kindness. Peace.

"Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie
WinterWren
Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
3 posted 2003-06-24 11:03 PM

I can relate to this one so well.
There are some people, that deep inside, you will always love, even after you've let go.
Beautiful poem, as per usual.
I think your poems are starting to improve.
Who woulda thought that they could get any better?

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.
shoffswife
Junior Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 38
KY, US
4 posted 2003-06-24 11:16 PM

OMG, this poem brought tears to my eyes, I guess maybe that meant that it really touched me.  I loved it.  Keep the poems coming.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2003-06-25 04:14 AM

awesome write!
WindSong
Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313
Long Island, New York
6 posted 2003-06-25 07:37 AM

Thanks you guys.This place surely does mean a lot to me. It's helped me to see what's good and bad about life. Thanks for your replies. PEACE!

~*~ Kirah ~*~

"Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2009-03-23 12:53 PM

Forever love **sigh**
~ Lovely Write


ARCTIC WIND
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