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Line So Thin
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Line So Thin |
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Shlee Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 72USA |
Confusion and frustration So much miscommunication We're now in a spot Always thought I could not, would not Now we've got a plan We put it in His hand I'll stick with it You won't ditch it Constantly asking help from Him Crossing to the right side of a line so thin It's a heavy burden relieved We're fixing it, hard to be believed I know we can do it You, me, and Him-sticking through it |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
*You, me, and Him-sticking through it the last lines tell it all It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Shlee Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 72USA |
I'm glad that's the way you see it  Thanks~~~This is quite different from my usual style so I was/am a little unsure about it... Shlee |
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