Open Poetry #26 |
I Wandered Back |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I Wandered Back Of places round the planet's whole The acres that I most extol I shared with wise and curious eyes and Stirred a grandson's soul I wandered back to childhood Where in the hills a house once stood Against the dream of summer green and Nestled in the wood I knew it would not be the same Through winter storm and April rain But still I yearned to now return to That from which I came The cottage I could not forget In memories drew me back, and yet My heart was dared, though not prepared to Weather my regret The country road, the tree topped lane The crooked gateway still remain Just as were sketched and deeply etched on Tablets of my brain In truth the land I still exhalt My wayward venture would not hault If over paved and not unscathed by Reckless human fault As we approached the final bend Along a stream where waters wend I heard the word of summer bird that Spoke to me again His song evoked a swell of tears For through the leaves a house appears In green of wood, it humbly stood there Through the course of years And in the beauty of it all The joys of spring, the crimson fall Engraved in deep of dreamer's sleep were Just as I recall A babbling brook, the summer geese The endless circles never cease A child's face in nature's grace is Blessed with inner peace Elizabeth Santos |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
beautiful... very beautiful... Liz, it is a pleasure to read you... Regards, Sudhir |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this is so beautiful Elizabeth!! Your use of imagery is unsurpassed! Wonderful wonderful poem for my library. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LovelyLizzyLady~ So graciously lovely, as is all you pen~ 'The endless circles never cease" BEAUTIFUL mirror of my thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I did that once and was amazed at how small it looked. And how far away the years had taken me. But everything in its place since I'm a neat person. LOL I am so glad to see you writing again and posting again. You know of course that this and your other piece are both excellent writes. Sy |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Wow..This is so beautiful I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now you know I am crying as I saw this property, but the human neglect sure has not taken from you the indelible memories etched in your heart Liz. You now get a chance to tell yet another grandchild about all those happy days once more. So good to have your words gracing the blue pages again (just wish I had time.)
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Lovely imagery, Elizabeth. Stirred my own memories of place I grew up. CG |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, all of this poem is just absolutely beautiful. This ending is especially precious.... A babbling brook, the summer geese The endless circles never cease A child's face in nature's grace is Blessed with inner peace Hugs, Ethel |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh, Liz, I am so happy to see one of your masterpieces again. How I have missed you. I felt like I was with you on this journey back. Thank you for sharing it with me. Hugs and Laughter, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very lovely Elizabeth. To return home....ah yes....I have done this. Things may not look the same...yet the heart feels the familiarty. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I wondered where you had wandered to...good to have you back, Liz. Pull that disappearing stunt again and punishment of my choice will be in order |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Elizabeth, this is pretty, sweet friend, and may every child's heart always be deeply touched by the beauties of nature, yay! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I'm so happy you're back, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz...So beautiful, brought a tear to my eyes..seeing it all with you, dear one. Hugs to you..it's good to read you again! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all so much. Your comments are so touching. My computer has been broken for over a month. I just got bach from a week in Chicago to visit my new grandaughter, and now am fighting a virus, but your remarks are very welcoming. Thank you Liz |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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