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Living Stagnation
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Who am I When you look through me To those beyond me standing I’m no one, No reason to be So off I go just shambling Useless flesh That people can’t see Gone into shadow hiding, This pale mess Lacking of beauty Alone in time just abiding. Gloom |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Professor Gloom you wrote a very touching piece here ... very impressive. There are such days when we feel invisible, just when we need more warmth than usual ... Cheer up and try to spot those who feel like this and be the first to look into their eyes and smile ... Love, Margherita  |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
I liked this alot it made me think. Very well written Julie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, Well that's about as gloomy as you can get. Did you have a bad night? We all love you.  |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Margherita, I tend to be invisible, even when seen, not noticed, I’m sure there are others I have not notice also Seeing only their shadows in passing Thank you, Whiskey, Pleased you enjoyed Thank you, Seymour, The nights are not so bad, Even my nightmares are a comfort of sorts It’s the days, when light shines on the void that I am. I appreciate your kindness of words Gloom |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Gloom, I wish that I could give you a comforting reply like Sy's...and yes I do agree with his. But, on the other hand, your dark is my dark, I relate to your words more than I can express, although each case is different. This touched the emotion within that I still have left. Well written~ Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Gloomy, yes, but that is how we perhaps all feel at one time or another...though the gloom is only within us... ...but so is the Light. Let it illuminate us. CG |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awww Gloom, I feel sorry for those who "look straight through you." For these are the ones who are blind to your brightness and your giving heart. Too bad for them. Your words touched me deeply. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sheesh Gloomy, From your reply to Sy it sounds like if you'd bite someone's neck they'd be yours forever... Love your gloomy writing......and you manage to cause me to think! So talented you are!!! Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Honeybee, You are very kind to respond, And Seymour has an excellence way with words But yours convey pleasant emotional response also. Thank you, CastleGuard, Perhaps light is within most, But most of my filling is shadow and darkness Thank you, Nightshade, You are kind to notice me with your response, These days most people are too busy to notice Too involved with daily life to be touched You honor me with your words. Thank you, regards2you, If it were so easy I’d sharpen my teeth, I am pleased to have given you some enjoyment And thoughts. Gloom |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Professor, My reply has not come up yet for editing purposes and I just read another of your poems... I need to apologize and realized too late I should never suppose anything re: poems written...I beg your pardon for my insensitivity.. Heart hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Not lacking of beauty just not seen...at least this is what I've heard |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
have to agree with Raph |
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