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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-04-30 06:02 PM




Tell me you still remember
Life before
We grew too old
Sitting on the back porch
Predicting love
With daisy petals
Crying on not
Proclaiming love
To some helpless soul
With a very bad written letter
Signed with half a dozen
X's and O's
In red magic marker.

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1 posted 2003-04-30 06:39 PM


nicely thought and written.  
Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-04-30 06:48 PM


thank you!
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3 posted 2003-04-30 07:05 PM


Brad...Very whimsical look at the days of yore and the meaning in these past memories. Liked your style very much. ***Ivy Rose
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4 posted 2003-04-30 07:12 PM


Brad...I remember those days....love was different then, but not better.  Enjoyed this!
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5 posted 2003-04-30 07:25 PM


Indeed I do remember when...

enjoyed this.


Sunkissed.

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6 posted 2003-04-30 08:16 PM


Grin...
Cleverly descript Brad...really liked the red magic marker...I guess I still remember
TD

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7 posted 2003-04-30 08:33 PM




This is sweet Brad. Makes me grin, too. Really like it.


Hugs, Pat

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8 posted 2003-04-30 10:43 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Brad, I haven't gotten to hold loves hand at all yet but when I do I want tonsavor every moment and I believe always loving like you just fell in love is a blessing! (smiles) This is a gem, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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9 posted 2003-04-30 10:52 PM


Wonderful Brad...*soft smile*
Much enjoyed!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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10 posted 2003-04-30 11:43 PM


Yes, I remember.

And I remember
sitting crossed legged
slouched over a crumpled note
"Do you love me?"
Yes or No

Thanks for taking me back.
quatro

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11 posted 2003-05-01 12:07 PM


Oooooh!!! I love this so much!!!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
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12 posted 2003-05-01 06:56 AM


The red magic marker does it...
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13 posted 2003-05-01 07:33 AM


Brad this just caused my heart to slightly tremble ...

Sweet and melancholic memories ....
Love, Margherita

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14 posted 2003-05-01 08:07 AM


This is very well-written!

And yes, I still remember. In fact it's not too long ago when I did this

Sitting on the back porch
Predicting love
With daisy petals
Crying on not
Proclaiming love
To some helpless soul

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Brad Majors
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15 posted 2003-05-01 11:46 AM


thank you
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16 posted 2003-05-25 03:33 AM


oh wow...yeah
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