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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Candid Candid is my broad of sward My valley green and my sword My media my rapier swing The sharp of it and the sting It is the music of my dance And the trusty of my lance The armor that I wear each day Amour that lets me clear the way It’s the flipping of the sleeve The lunge in pas-s-ado naive The clatters of the chatters word The lifting of the shroud absurd A charge upon the giant lie A cut across the pliant sigh A leap upon the back of lack The beanstalk that was grown by Jack It’s candid that can slope much wrath It is the soap within your bath. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Candid shines in your eyes ... and your words confirm. "it can slope much wrath ..." yes, but also "Amour that lets me clear the way .." Your poems are often a challenge for me .... must check some words, but in the end I grasp what I have to grasp and think "Seymour is DEEP". Love, Margherita  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Sy - I'll be remembering that you're a'peeking!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita A peep in the deep is like a clean sweep. LOL thank you for the read and reply. Sunshine, I don't peep at my loves I stare, LOL  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'The lunge in pas-s-ado naive' Now just how ORIGINAL is that ? VERY ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well now Seymour... are you peeking or is that a stare? Excellent write this morn love. Tea's on..I'll pour. Have a wonder-filled day! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, What a beautiful comment, almost as beautiful as you. Nancy, Thank you sweet, I'll have Randy fly me over. LOL |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
My goodness Seymour, I will certainly be keeping an eye on the soap in my shower to-day!!  Enjoyed your words as always. Gave me a grin they did!! Strawberry tarts to-day! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Strawberry tarts, wonderful, I'll be right there. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my! I envisioned you, a gallant knight suited in armor, swinging your sword to clear the way to my bath chamber where I am soaking in a lilac-scented bubble bath! What a great way to start my day!  May you have a glorious day, sir knight! Angel hugs & kisses, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (05-01-2003 10:58 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Just hold that thought, I'll saddle my Randy and pass your way. LOL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I await randy you! I mean, I await Randy and you! Huggums, EA |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wonderful, wonderful, YOU! It’s candid that can slope much wrath It is the soap within your bath. That's a nice way to slide~ left me smiling this morning! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
LOL Seymour, you really are a rascal..... Randy and all...LOL  Have a good day, friend. Hugs,  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-01-2003 11:16 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Never fear we'll both be there. LOL BluesSerenade A smile is a smile, is a smile.  Ethel Ain't I the one, LOL |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) And how we should all climb that beanstalk and go beyond that castle and take ourselves back to the stars! (big hugggsssssss) You can be candid without the camera certainly, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you for the read and bump. |
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