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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2003-04-30 07:12 PM

Flirting with my tastebuds
Tempting my lips
I dream
I cry
I long
For your kiss
Like a fine wine
My desires fill my heart
Fill my dreams
Fill my soul
It is you
The one I long to hold close
I'm never going to ask
You of the same
I don't want to be selfish
Nor come off as insane
So here I drink this wine
With you in my thoughts again tonight
This fine wine
Is as close
As I'll ever get to you
Again tonight
When my desires pass out
Beneath the full flavour
Of the sweet mixture of the stars and strawberries
Will I hold you again
Pray for you again
And dream of you again...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Poet_Jenny_Lea
Junior Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 27
Texas

1 posted 2003-04-30 08:23 PM

A great description of wanting, so wanting, a kiss from the one you desire. And as we all know, wine is just as intoxicating as a kiss... especially a good one.

Great poem, loved reading it.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-04-30 09:12 PM

When my desires pass out
Beneath the full flavour
Of the sweet mixture of the stars and strawberries
Will I hold you again
Pray for you again
And dream of you again...

Ah, the longing in this write is so strong. Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-05-01 02:52 PM

great writing..i'm pretty much speechless beyond those words

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

4 posted 2003-05-01 03:46 PM

good description

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-05-02 06:14 PM

Kris:

hmmm . . . *smiling*
is very nice to see you like this
beautiful writing, my friend
xxoo

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-05-02 09:22 PM

I gather his kiss is not just a kiss!

~ May you have your heart's desire!

Love & Light,
EA

D'sWhisper
Member

since 2003-06-16

Posts 68
Washington, USA

7 posted 2003-06-21 07:53 AM

The hopelessness of this presses against the skin so lightly...but can be felt. Lovely...so sad, but lovely. ~DW~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-06-22 06:24 AM

Yes, kisses are good...James

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