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chaos theory |
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heart attack New Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 4 |
too many possibilities so intimate with entropy too intricate to ever see a way out of this state i put my faith in hopelessness futility and motionless the oceans rot without a wave to break this stagnant haze i ache of the malfunction drop the blindest fall of tears i can feel the paralysis that anchors me here my brain makes a static that caresses my fear and i dont feel the current pulling anywhere at all feel the echo light obscured by life only in this moment could i ever understand rushing down the rivers of the devil's right hand suffocate you slowly but you know the plan whatever only like a fistful of sand |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is a very interesting write....I would just work on the physical layout of the poem though!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
This is still making waves in my brain. Great poem.. Welcome to passions  Love, |
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