Open Poetry #26 |
Tall Seas |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As tall blue seas were rollin’ long the painted oaken side and the mate’s voice was roarin’ ‘gainst the loudly screaming gale. The men were quickly bracing for a foaming salty ride that would make a poor landlubber groan and look deathly pale. The pitch fixed the trickles of the salty blue from the cracks and the stew was swaying o’er the coal fire in the galley. The watch stood by sternly as the men laid in swinging racks until four bells awoke them to their next turn of duty. Twas a life of a sailor ‘neath the tall mast of the main where all was adventure till the next port of call was found They’d sit at a table telling those old salty tales again and of those busty ladies they would gleefully expound The ladies would come prancin, across that cold sawdust floor certain to take a chance in a lone rendezvous for two Hips swayin in their dancin, eyes saying let us explore. The youngest man a lad of nineteen tender years would do. With courage he would saunter to the squirming midst of them as loud squeals were emitted once the chosen prize was caught The candles were flickering so the lights were way down dim as the lad was led away, a sweet treat the girls had sought. The morning brought them staggering back to their waiting ship to main the rail, unfurl the sail and lift the mooring line. While onshore the ladies waved till once again their long trip would bring them home to brag and boast of liberty so fine. [This message has been edited by Magnus (04-30-2003 07:39 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
wow this write about the men and the sea was terrifect!!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!Again you have outdone yourself and left me in awe of a talent that never stops growing...I LOVE IT!!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah..."down to the sea in ships" as my father used to say. Great tale well told my friend. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Applause...nobody can write these like you do Mag. Happy to see the results came out so fine. TD |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I so enjoyed this salty tale! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, A brawny tale at best, but very enjoyable. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Enjoyed this story much, written like a sailor. Jason |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Barry, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your wonderful sea-faring words do! (big hugggssssss) Yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I just had to read it again...your talent continues to amaze me as you weave magic with your pen.... |
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Gnubbin Junior Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 10Eastern USA |
as an ex-sailor, I can thoroughly appreciate this maritime tale. well done, Sir Gnub there ain't no lovin' |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Barry....so very much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
Ah yes, written by a true sailor indeed! Man, this is so good I can taste the salt, and gosh, I even see those busty ladies! Pure talent here for sure! I truly felt like I was on the boat with them - WOW! ~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A 'Mag'nificent tale of sea and ale! Loved it, Sailor Man! Linda |
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