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Mindfire
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 6


0 posted 2003-05-03 01:25 AM



Wake up for the first time
What your doing to yourselfs a crime
Do you really like their lies
You know everyone dies
So live in the here and now
don't wait for curtin's fall then bow
You only caught the last act
you Wanted more thats a fact
Then you realize what you wanted
More than all you had you flaunted
You wanted to be their from curtin call
And give it your all til curtain fall
But alas the curtins down
Your time is up now pass the crown
They lower you down into a hole
Then mark your grave with a wooden pole

         Tyler Edward Anderson

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jennirey
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since 2002-01-24
Posts 198
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1 posted 2003-05-03 01:35 AM


What a deep subject for your first post, Very good read. Stick around we want to hear what you have to say..

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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2 posted 2003-05-03 01:39 AM


enteresting write lets see some more,

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
3 posted 2003-06-22 12:17 PM


WElcome to passions... I hope to read much more from you.

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

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