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In Titled Feelings
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In Titled Feelings |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In Titled Feelings Take my hand, let me lead you to happiness, embraced, by one tiny raindrop trickling down, reminding me of the last words when rhythm of hearts slowed their beat and eyes silently watched the smile in passing. Since the raindrops fell and the bonds of friendship have loosened, I am caught in tomorrow's dawn knowing this moment had to come, that your being mute to my needs, brought too many ups and downs. That my life was all in a day's dream, and the pondering had to end, no longer was my level of endurance able to hold me together, no longer was I fit to be by your side. You will realize, some day that the heart of a poet, this poet, had once kept rhythm with yours. But that the many random thoughts, the many secrets held, kept me from dancing with you. The walk away is not easy for me. The hurtful words were not of my making, but were forced upon me by my loss of pride. It has always been as you wish, although now my sunny days will be holding clouds and the only thing that the tie dyed sky holds for me is shades of blue, bound to me as my sun sets on this, a very sad day, after all. Just remember, I did this for you, in sorrow as a healing bleed, as I paint my heart in red and emotions seep behind the falling of tears. M I wish to thank in order and some with a slight change: ~verse 1~ zenny Thomas119gold vlraynes QjQ Professor Gloom ~verse 2~ Ivy Rose HopeS Jeffrey Carter DragonFang littlewing jellybeans sperarifraai Lighthousebob Joyce Johnson peaceful_dreamer ~verse3~ Gentle Spirit Professor Gloom Bill Charles waldopepper MERCURY ~verse 4~ Greeneyes BluesSerenade regards2you the_loner_23 Krishankins ~verse5~ peaceful_dreamer aaron woodside Susan Caldwell jennirey QjQ dgvarner Thank you again, for giving me the voice of your words and the courage to speak them. Much gratitude M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-29-2003 11:46 PM).] |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I like this alot |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh Maureen, hugs!! What a very special gift this is. It reads with an endless flow that pours from your heart and soul. Only you Maur~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very cool..I enjoyed that much  you did a great job putting titles together in a poem all its own!(btw..what a surprise to see one of mine in there! lol) enjoyed.. hugs, g "If you suppress laughter, it goes down and spreads out your hips."- Steve Allen |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Brad, Lori and G, I found the titles held my thoughts for that day... ~Smiles M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well how did i miss this one? |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
very creative, very......enjoyed this very much.....*smile* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Well Dixie, if you keep dragging these up, you will keep me awake late into the night responding to them... thanks  jellybeans, must have been one of those days that I couldn't find my own words to describe my feelings. thank youM |
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