Open Poetry #26 |
Enjoyment |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Oh crackling sound, from within the mind, refresh us with your vibration of a beating heart, let the blood circulate in a feeling sensation, thundering in lightning pleasure, storming in perspiration, of the moisture of thirst, needing refreshed in the nourishment of the endless horizon. Sounds quake in me, in stimulated awakenings, hear the silence of beauty, the roar of the ocean on a full moon night, birds singing so clear in the early morning light, the intoxicating rippling of water on half hidden rocks, on a lazy summer’s day. See things in that special light of the music of the heart, sighing in lungs of fresh air, your mind taking flight upon a pillow of clouds, floating into the heavens of sensual mind trances, in loving memories of needed cuddling. Senses aroused, every nerve ending, feeling so alive, tingling from within a beautiful day, blossoming with smiles, flowering in rainbows, within every color imaginable, creativity’s bouquet of being so lucky as to enjoy live totally. D.Lester Young Somewhere in America not on company time 05/10 to 5/26/0 |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous write!!!!! QjQ |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
Good stuff....I liked this. Joe |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the ending especially |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
"Sounds quake in me, in stimulated awakenings, hear the silence of beauty, the roar of the ocean on a full moon night, birds singing so clear in the early morning light, the intoxicating rippling of water on half hidden rocks, on a lazy summer’s day." I absolutely love the images that this poem brings to mind...you have described it beautifully...great write... sp just a hang-up call and the quiet breathing of our persian we call cajun on a wednesday... |
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