Open Poetry #26 |
My Reality's Dream |
smalls Member
since 2002-12-20
Posts 62 |
My Reality’s Dream In and out of my dreams In and out of my realities. Sometimes I wake to joy Sometimes I sleep to pain. Sometimes I wake to pain Sometimes I sleep to joy. Whatever my reality brings My dreams tend to forget. Whatever my dreams bring My realities tend to remember. My realities seek my dreams My dreams run from my realities. My reality’s dream… In my dreams Out of my realties. Please check out my poetry online |
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Dreamer@ Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 38Denmark |
First as i read your words i was abit confused but as i began to set them together and follow the hidden line i saw. I found out they was like a brainstorm but they followed eachother like if every sentence was connected. As like life everything is followed by things we do act and think like. I enjoyed this one smile Dreamer@ |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
what we put in comes out :-) It was catchy at first, but after the second time I got it just the way you wrote it (I think).... great! :-) Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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smalls Member
since 2002-12-20
Posts 62 |
Thanks you for your replies. It's funny how sometimes we write as if the other person can read our thorughts... I I am glad that you guys were abelt o understand it though... It's my reality wanting to be like my dream, therefore, it dreams to be so, hence the titel, eheheh. Thank you again and smiles as well. Please check out my poetry online |
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Crazy Eddie Member
since 2002-09-14
Posts 178 |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
dreams n realities keeps us thinking |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
In my realities I'm wanting to understand my dreams to help know my realites!!! Enjoyed!!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
this is really thought provoking... good write Love, |
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