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Danielle
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since 1999-12-01
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Providence, RI, USA

0 posted 2003-05-02 10:26 PM


Is all of what's been happening just Fate?
Is my life planned out to the tee?

I feel like I've lost control
Sholdn't life be what you make it?
If so, then why is mine so hard?

Has Fate palyed an ugly trick on me?
Does seeing me in pain make it feel happy inside some how?

Why would Fate, such an understanding thing, force me to love what I could not keep?
To love and not be able to show that love is worse then to ot love at all

Fate gave me a gift
The crully ripped it away
Just when I had trusted Fate to give me a love I thought I could keep
That's when Fate ripped them away

Seems Fate always likes to hear my cries of pain
See me huddled in a ball and crying...

Blessed Be Those Who
Reads My Writing

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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1 posted 2003-05-02 11:48 PM


yes fate has it's ways of entering our lives,  

nice expresions

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
2 posted 2003-06-22 12:29 PM


we live life through fates wanderings, fate is what draws us nearer. Great poem!

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

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