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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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Cream colored roses dipped in blue A simple look Or maybe two Watching a sunset hand in hand On a blanket Toes in the sand Slow dances danced in your embrace Heart on my sleeve Smile on my face I feel your touch, making me fall I think this is love And it's real, after all Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is good....Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hey there Mister.. It's good to read you here again. Wonderful closing, and such beautiful lines~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write, enjoyied  |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Yes be sure its true..... I Love your words... good luck....and keep going hugssssssssssss secretlife |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kris! You've been away too long! Welcome home! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so beautiful a write Kris! Don't you go away too far again ya hear?! ~Smiles, Hugs, and a Vote, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Soft, gentle, tender and extremely vote worthy. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It is nice, after all..isn't it *s M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kris!!!!!! You've returned to your PiP home! Thank goodness you are safe and sound! Loved the gentle touch to this love poem. Missed you, soldier man! Warm lovin' hugs, Linda |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
the romance is back...about time you showed up...h |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I missed ALL of you!!!!!!! Thank you all so much for the wonderful welcome back!!!! The only one that can hold you back is yourself. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Kristopher, this is beautiful, sweet friend, yay, I'm so happy you're back! (does happy dance) May loves smile always sing in your heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
ooooo!! You have my vote! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Glad to see you dude. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It's the first time I come across you and I very much enjoyed your write .... the scene is ideal to think it is TRUE. Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Enjoyed this one friend. Hope to see it in Reflections. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Krishankins - and when it's real, it's great... BC |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Melodic write Kris...real nice. TD |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
a welcomed sincerity in this write..stick around somemore  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well I can't remember if i voted or not...so I'm gonna do it again then |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Kris Your words flowed like a tranquil stream and were so very beautiful. I hope all is well with you. "A poet weaves his words through each verse to create a most beautiful tapestry for us all to admire" Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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