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Love, Roads, and Masters
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Love, Roads, and Masters |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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It sounds so sweet, So comforting, To say the words you love. So cheerful yet misunderstood, That "you just need to love." The road is straight and narrow. They don’t all lead you Home. We’re in a fight With just two sides, And there’s no time to roam. The sword cuts both directions And I fear that you are dead. You love the world, smile at life, And keep your family fed... But works will get you nowhere, And love is God alone... You need His understanding, Please do not lean on Your own. - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Lovely and powerful! Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hmm, it feels good to be able to lean on someone stronger once in a while. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Alyssa, Well, now you tell me!!! Grins..it is never too late to relearn this lesson. Well written.. Hugs and love, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Ericc, glad you think so, thank you.Midnitesun, yea you're right it does. And its even greater if we do that continually Thank you.Pat, trust me, I think I relearn this lesson everyday!! lol Some of us just have a harder time learning then other  ..thank you.Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Enjoyed the truth in this..... Nice write!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Bridgette, I apologize for taking so long to thank you. But now.. thanky you! Very appreciated Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) The sword DOES cut both directions indeed, I am speaking for all the believers of the world when He truly had to endure far more than that in being crucified and how He knows how we all feel and only wants us to understand love so we don't have to fall upon that sacrifice from ourselves! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is very powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
A truth told is poetry... and this is poetry. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Dixie, thanks  Noah, yes, He endured so much... and by OUR own hand. Thanks for replying Kethry, thanks This definitely is truth..!Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well and truthfully said, my friend... jwesley |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
jwesely, thank you good to see someone acknowledge truth! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
"But works will get you nowhere, And love is God alone... You need His understanding, Please do not lean on Your own." Excellent! To love is to (truly) live, but if we try and love on our own strength, we often head down the wrong road... ~EL Campeador “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
EL Campeador, thanks for replying. ..I agree but think if we try to do it on our own then we ALWAYS head down the wrong road!Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the meaning is so deep here...it puts me in awe |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Dixie, Awe is a good place to be, don'tcha think Thanks for replying! You're appreciated.Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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