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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Away To be away and not to feel All those senses of the real Imprisons me in fantasy By bars of mental imagery And though the ecstasy exists And wraps me in a tender mist Yet I falter in the dark And cannot feel the real of stark. This brings brine unto my face That falls upon your lovely lace That dries and leaves a powdered white Upon your golden loving light. I would the power of our love To fly us like the snow white dove To keep us in a third worlds fair Soul to soul and unaware I would Eden open its door And swallow us forevermore. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I would Eden open its door And swallow us forevermore. Ah, now that starts my Monday off with a lovely thought - thankyou dear Seymour. Where is my sister with the tea? Oh well...I will get the blueberry muffins ready. hugs to you on this sunny morn. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I would Eden open its door And swallow us forevermore." And, wouldn't that be just wonderful Sy?! Your pearls of wisdom leave me sitting here pondering on this glorious spring morn. Please don't tell me everyone is still asleep except you and I here in Pipville? Come sit and have tea and talk to me..just for a bit. ~Morning hugs~  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you sweet, still having trouble with my computer trying to get it fixed but I don't know.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good good morning Sy... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Happy, spring morning, Mr. T.! This lovely poem moved me soooo much that I had to read again--and I enjoyed it even more the second time around! You are such an honorable and loving man--and a sonneteer beyond compare! P.S. Some morning I would love to join you, Nancy & Chris for some chit chat over a nice cup of tea and some delicious treats! Lovin' hugs for a lovin' poet! EA |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, A lovely poem...enjoyed greatly and makes me smile. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you sweet, Earth Angel Got computer troubles, this seems to be the only program I can pull up. Must be an angel siting on my shoulder. LOL Pat, Glad I made you smile, I wish I could LOL |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
To be away and not to feel All those senses of the real Imprisons me in fantasy By bars of mental imagery I want to be inprisioned in a place such as this my friend. Move over, and make room in that there cell.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you dear. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey! I didn't get my morning kiss on cheek. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhiteRose Done, thank you, Nancy, Sorry about that, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...Your fantasy carries such sweet passion.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Is it working better now? LOL. BTW, thank you for another very wonderful write. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (04-28-2003 12:46 PM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy, good afternoon. I've spent 3 days having a fantasy runaway in a castle in the mist. Just can't deal with reality right now!! Care to join me? Hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Why thank you sweet. Midnitesun Thank you for the lovely reply, Marti, Why not I'll fly Randy right over, LOL |
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