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To Tim |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
"Every Now And Then" ...Tears are ever running, They soak my quiet soul And the salt assaults my wounds. But every now and then You make me forget And I smile And giggle And the sound surprises me As if I forgot I could. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Dear KoKo, Oh this is so sad  "They soak my quiet soul" -Oh I loved this line so much, how you thought of this, wow! Oh, but it develops into well, not a happy poem, still so sad, but into a smile, even if it is a short respite. Oh this poem moves me so much! Very beautiful write KoKo. Mike  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
KoKo...yes, sometimes that is how Tim touches us...he can be meteorically beautiful in his writing, and then pen something so charmingly witty and funny that we burst out laughing at the monitor! Thank you for letting others know what a talented writer he is! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
What a sweet poem! Beautiful. Eric |
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Mary Ann Member
since 2003-04-23
Posts 111 |
This is lovely I like how you moved from sad to hopeful and even happy from beginning to end..... thank you for the wonderful read! God bless, Mary Ann |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
KoKo, This is delightful in that it does capture reality. Sorry, am not that familiar with his poems, but, I have had this happen. Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I, too, am a huge fan of Sir Tim's writing! I am certain that your poem, and the replies that is receiving, will show him just how much both he, and his poetry, are appreciated! Warm hugs, EA |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Oh man...hehehe I'm sorry. I was thinking this might happen last night as I was going to bed...I was speaking of my best friend Tim...Not the Tim here...I'm sorry! I do, of course, love this writings. Oh man...I really should have explained that in the poem. I'm very sorry for the mix up and confusion  ...I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Smiling here... I have to admit the title caught my eye, and was a bit surprised by some of the responses I read of which I am flattered. But I am more jealous than flattered. While he may have a pretty nice name, how can this Tim guy be so lucky to get poetry like this written for him. Koko, your Tim is very fortunate to have you as a friend. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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