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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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So slight the needles prick as they begin etched lines ink upon skin within my soul intricate and bold melded with a rainbow listen . . . for the flapping of wings let the buzzing begin Again "ALL WE ARE SAYING . . . IS GIVE INKED A CHANCE . . . " [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-27-2003 06:29 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
yes ink does leave many marks!!! "It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
methinks there are several layers etched here, Sue well done |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent! So how many does this make? Eric |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your beautiful words do! (kiss on cheek) May these wonderful thoughts always deeply etch in your soul, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Your writing is brilliant...it truly is. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
The was beautiful Sue. I hope all is well with you. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I definitely like this, one day..a dragon maybe the yin/yang symbol just so much to choose from |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I can't find any words to explain how much I love this... I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I loved this one Remined me of my first two tats - what a cool experience |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
smile you wrote yourself! my soul intricate and bold melded with a rainbow listen.... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - another fine write my friend, excellence par de foe... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! awesome piece! what power in so little space! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a cool write ~ there's much vividness and power in this...you've mastered this style well. Take care, Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
intricate and bold melded with a rainbow What a perfectly beautiful poem. You've out done yourself in so few words. Bravo Tweets~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the first cut is the deepest.........then its all routine.......... itching for a bit of the ink again, too..... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
a very bright image here enjoyed A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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