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Bend to the Breeze
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Bend to the Breeze |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Flower in a field of weeds stretch your neck to the sun and free your roots from their tangled claws draw strength from within your petals begin to become the tallest among this field the fight each darkened night refrain the wither soft whisper come hither they chant to you in your sleep your dreams wilted and bending to the breeze |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another beauty  |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
awesome write but these lines: begin to become the tallest among this field the fight each darkened night refrain the wither soft whisper come hither they chant to you you ARE the tallest & most beautiful flower the fact that you are surrounded by weeds only makes your beauty stand out more - never give up - never surrender stay the positive light in this dark & negative world for you amaze me & I sooo look forward to more from you . . . all that we see is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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Shadowed_Innersense Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 49somewhere at the edge |
True growth .... in wisdom as well as word. |
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Sonic Junior Member
since 2003-05-06
Posts 13Victoria, Australia |
Flower in a field of weeds So easy to be overcome by what surrounds us. Gotta hold on to our dreams. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Lovely thoughts, Sue. Liked the imagery. Hugs, Pat |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - your writing sings with you. Another gooder one... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Dixie: thank you so much - hey where have you been missy? Dream: what a smile you have put on my face today! Thank you for thinking so highly of me - is good to see you back in here again - and I , too look forward to your writing thank you xxoo Shadows - thank you so much - needed that much Sonic - yes - true so true thank you Pat - thank you so much - miss you too Bill - hehehe a gooder one - when are you starting that dictionary btw? hmmmm thanks guys xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I even loved the title! Happy Spring time! Huggums, Linda |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I love the thought of dreams in the breeze, even when they wilt, there is beauty in remembering when. Sweet, Tweets~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's always amazing to see the flowers spared among the weeds... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful words sue..as always |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!! Charisma |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh my...this is awesome! Eric |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
amazing! |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Littlewing, I am swaying and bending with the breeze as I read your poem so vividly! Awesome job! quatro |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Flower in a field of weeds It is not easy to be a survivor in this world. But good will always overcome evil. I enjoyed this very much. Hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your words sing beautifully on the wind....I love it... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Linda: heheh ahhh Spring yesss TY James - thank you so much! Bluesy _ remembering - hmmm yes - know what you mean TY Karilea: such sweet words TY Raph: as always - yes - *wink* thank you so sweet you are Charisma & Brad - Thank you so much! Ericc - thank you - so so much quatro - swaying with me very nice TY Marti - ahhh ypu got it sister . . . Star - how very sweet of you thank you Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-07-2003 08:07 PM).] |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
I like. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, all your wonderful words make me smile as every morning glory can rise to the sunshine too! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully uplifting, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
See all that up there? DITTO! Sheesh! late again! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sue I had the most beautiful picture in my mind after reading your lovely words. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Eromyna - thank you - glad you liked Noah - thanks for the kiss and the smile needed that much Ed - hehehe I know what you mean exactly lol thank you Sue - OMG - how very sweet - glad I painted without knowing it Thanks guys xxoo |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
my lady - truly worth another read . . . all that we see is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Flower in a field of weeds stretch your neck to the sun and free your roots from their tangled claws draw strength from within your petals I still think you are amazing, Littleone.  Hugs, Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
dream: thanks for the bump . . . Ethel: as are you to me - thank you for being so kind to me and I hold you in my heart as well thanks guys xxoo |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You're a hollyhock in crabgrass, Sue, tall and strong and free! You are writing so well! 'Course I think you started out that way and just get better. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ken: my oh my . . . made me smile big this morning . . . thank you so much you are so very sweet xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
ommmmmmmmmmmmm........and to all things a season, beautiful, sue, just beautiful |
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