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Marsha
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0 posted 2003-06-04 10:31 AM




A Sister Ring

Heart to heart we played
all day. Sending words winging
each way. First a response to you from me.
Then your reply in sweet poetry. Souls united
We wandered far. Joined together by our natal
star. A word from you then from me. Oh how we
enjoyed our poetry. On these pages shaded blue
we danced a duet made for two. All who see us
smile and say. Here they are again to play. In
innocence we played our game. No two days
were quite the same. Your darkness
blended me. And my light set
you free. Still we play in

shade and light.
But now our games are
out of sight. The places where
we used to be. Are colder now and
not so free. Two we are but think
as one. Two souls who bask in
HIS sun. And forever we
two shall be. Linked

in poetic Harmony.

Marsha



Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry


[This message has been edited by Marsha (06-04-2003 11:18 AM).]

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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2003-06-04 10:33 AM


Marsha - Nice to see you. Hope you are doing well...

BC

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2 posted 2003-06-04 10:42 AM



Marsha!  You've come home!  Bless you girl.  We have missed your lovely face, and your wonderful poems.  Can you stay awhile and play, please?  We've some wonderful new friends to introduce to you...and you to them.

Please stay and play awhile?


Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-06-04 10:54 AM


Marsha
Love your picture and your lovely poem.

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4 posted 2003-06-04 11:13 AM


Oh, Marsha! This is gorgeous!
Two we are but think
as one. Two souls who bask in
HIS sun.


I loved this, and envy your talent. Beatiful words!

Yours,
Marie

"You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life)

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5 posted 2003-06-04 11:21 AM


MarshaDarlingGirl~
All those who truly love you are ALWAYS happy to see you visit~

You've got an ever-growing passel of poetic friends~

You tickle me, sister dear~

AND ... did I tell you .... I got to use 'WONKY' in a Scrabble game with Bill ?
He challenged it ... and it cost him big points !!!

Love you darling ... this is splendiforous !!!
Mushy *Huglets* to you~
Me WUB you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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6 posted 2003-06-04 12:17 PM


Marsha, what a delight it is to read your lovely words again!! Hope you are well dear poetess. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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7 posted 2003-06-04 01:00 PM


wonderful presentation! great write!
Suetang
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8 posted 2003-06-05 01:04 AM


Hello Marsha

How lovely to see your smiling face gracing these pages of blue.  I have missed reading your inspirational words and I send my warmest regards to you across the miles.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

jaysh
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9 posted 2003-06-05 01:14 AM


wow i liked that! its really cool, good poem too I like!
ethome
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10 posted 2003-06-05 01:14 AM


Very nice picture and a very nice poem
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11 posted 2003-06-05 11:14 PM


It's so good to see you posting, my friend. *S* And what a beauty you've brought us... *S* Do I get extra points if I guess the sister? LOL

Beautiful work, Mushy one... and welcome back!

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12 posted 2003-06-06 12:42 PM


Marsha, I haven't seen very much of you since I've been here. But, I have seen enough of your work to know I will love and enjoy reading whatever I see your name on. You are a very talented writer and I love everything I've ever read of yours. This poem is not exception. I love the way you presented it, too. I hope to see much more of you here on the blue pages. Thank you.
Hugs  
Ethel

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13 posted 2003-06-06 01:23 AM


Marsha, this is beautiful. I am glad to see you back.
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14 posted 2003-06-06 02:17 AM


Well sweet Mushy!
I should have known that your return would be impressive! And not just for presentation either. What a wonderful write. I love how it flows but mostly I love what it says. It is so very good to see you here. Please write some more...for me, okay?
&

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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