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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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Screams- who screams? urban wolves roam blacktop streets, with a thirst for flesh- a thirst for blood stone torn from stone ten don't look the same, for one fate is undecided, another cast in stone, how it stings, salt in my wound, to see them- disapeir with writing on the walls, all that was left of those broken lines cut short Never be normal! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Liz, I think we all feel like we are being held by the puppet master with strings attached but when we discover the stark reality we are really more free than we think and that takes much weight off our shoulders! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Liz I think you're one of the more brilliant and tragically overlooked writers on this board. Excellent write! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Liz: I agree with Raph glad to see you in Open more This write reminds me of my city how they drop like flies . . . amazing xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-27-2003 04:28 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
writing on the walls, all that was left of those broken lines I liked this alot!! Nicely done windy woman! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Bump...because this should be read |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I love this piece! Thanks for posting it! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sweet Wind....how did I manage to miss this one first time round? Very deep and well written piece. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
love ya liz. went hunting for some recent wind wonders and found this. you never disappoint. it's hard hitting stuff lady, and i like it. much love, gemma xxxxxxx |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi little Liz.....  I hope all is well with you. I'm sorry that I didn't see this earlier. I'm glad that I did now. This is a very good poem .  Hugs, Ethel |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
You guys made me cry. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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