Open Poetry #26 |
Heretic -- warning controversial content |
eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
This is in memory of everyone who has been abused or abandoned by my church in its darker days Heretic See how she marches to the edge Her eyes closed - she cannot see Her hands tied - she cannot touch Her feet watched - she cannot run Her heart bleeding - but she feels All in God’s name |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A powerful piece...no matter what the church, many have made this walk through time...in one circumstance or another. TD |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Amen, brother! |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
Icebox, I think eminor_angel is a sister. So it should be "amen sister". No offense, but you must be gender conscience! tsk tsk! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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22NICK22 Member
since 2003-05-29
Posts 54 |
IT WAS PRETTY GOOD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very powerful write, what a message! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Powerful write just as the others have mentioned. Do some people deserve such discipline? I think some really do but many don't The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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