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The Line Between Us....
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The Line Between Us.... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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THE LINE BETWEEN US.... Did we cross the line between us A little but that’s OK We both needed someone To reach out to on that day A touch A smile A hug A kiss These are the little things We both seem to miss Was it chemistry or friendship Was it simply being there Did we plan for this to happen Did we even give a care Is it too late to save our friendship Is it too late to save the day I trust that it will work out fine And that we will find a way Thank you for your kindness Thank you for your care Thank you for being in my life I think we make a great pair! Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very well written,, i enjoyed... Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Roniece~ Lovely to see you here~ I liked this .. kind of reminded me of those times I 'colored outside the lines'~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Me thinks we follow the line too much at times, I think perhaps to follow our feelings is our only true path. Just me rambling again, take care my friend! And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wonderful write! |
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