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Open Poetry #26

Celebrity In Red

Poe_Pot_Pie
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

0 posted 2003-06-02 04:29 PM

You give me pleasure, unimaginable enjoyment.
How I long for my lips to touch you!
Your unmistakable scent,
Gives me energy to walk on clouds.
My tongue cannot forget you.
To me, you are a celebrity,
Covered in red,
Your favourite colour.
Let me hold you once more,
For you give me pure delight.

Ah, Coca-Cola

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-02 04:38 PM

I loved it. I fealt like I was watching a cola commercial. LOL

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-06-02 04:40 PM

AH! Cute write...much enjoyed the chuckle!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

3 posted 2003-06-02 05:12 PM

it was funny. totally an advert but funny.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

4 posted 2003-06-02 05:20 PM

Wonderful...Make mine a diet!

Patricia

eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

5 posted 2003-06-02 05:53 PM

I love this! At first I thought, wow, Poe's fallen in love! Then I was surprised at the end.

never forget the woka!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-06-03 03:36 AM

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