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Open Poetry #26

Lost Without You

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

0 posted 2003-06-02 03:00 PM

I’m lost without you.
Stuck with the hands you used to hold,
The lips you used to kiss,
The body you used to touch,
The heart you used to love.

I’m lost without you.
Stuck with the hands, that miss being held.
The lips, that feel lost without yours,
The body, that yearns for your touch,
The heart, that you have crushed.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-06-02 03:26 PM

Janna,

Heartfelt writing. Remember:

The hands should push away from the one that doesn't give back
The lips should shout that they won't settle for less
The Body should long for the touch of one that is worthy
And the heart, should rejoice that it may love again and be fulfilled.

Susan C.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-06-02 03:35 PM

I felt such pain when my ex Greg dumped me. Great write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

3 posted 2003-06-02 06:36 PM

thank you so much for that susan, I never really looked at it that way, but that made me feel better!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-03 03:43 AM

ouch

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