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Open Poetry #26

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Yogi
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since 2001-11-05

Posts 68

0 posted 2003-06-02 07:40 AM

She Stands Tall
Silent, Daunting, Awe Inspiring
Just Looking Sends Fear Into Your Soul
Gray, Razor Sharp Edges With Defense In Mind
She Lures Climbers, Experienced And Not
Thinking She Will Show Them The Way
Letting Go Of Her Secrets, She Will Not
She Plays With There Minds
Convincing Them They Can Conquer Her
Pressing Them To Go On Further, To Reach The Skies
Giving Some A False Dream, False Thoughts
They Reach The Death Zone, Her Soul
Many Have Died, Many Have Survived
But She Always Keeps Enough Room For Just One More
Even If She Lets You Into Her Heart
Letting You Stand On Top Of The World
She Always Has A Surprise In Stall For Your Return
She Will Always Bit Back

[This message has been edited by Yogi (06-02-2003 08:35 AM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-02 06:25 PM

I love the imagery and the way you described the mountain

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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2 posted 2003-06-03 03:17 AM

great writ ehere, but can't figure out the reason for the capital lettering

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