Open Poetry #26 |
Your Trust (for a friend) |
Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You trusted me and found you’re safe, have let me walk within your heart, where I’ve seen beauty with each gaze. My dear, you are a work of art. In another life, you’d be mine. At least, that is my fantasy. Just thinking of you brings a smile. Sweet one, you are the breath of me. But is it wrong to feel such love for friend who is my very best, to want to kiss your eyes, your lips, to feel your heart beat ‘gainst my chest? I cannot help the way I feel and I will not apologize, for wanting to express my love, for longing so to kiss your eyes. One breath away, just one short breath, yet in this life you‘re out of reach, but in my dreams you’re always here, sitting with me upon the beach. I love you, precious. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwww....would you look at this?! What complete sweetness....that is one lucky friend you have |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
No, I'm the lucky one. She truly is a very beautiful blessing to my life. hugsss |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael...Most tenderly written and not wrong. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Michael, you are truly blessed to have a friend like this. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So beautiful. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Live life and love well... Warm hugs, Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Michael - oh, how lucky you are to have such a wonderful friend. Of course, you are an easy fellow to like and become fast friends with.Enjoyed this. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
What a wonderful expression of love felt for someone very special to you. Makes the heart beat a little stronger. Thankyou for sharing Julie |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"One breath away, just one short breath, yet in this life you‘re out of reach," It's hard not to be in tune with this, especially since you say it all so well, capture the feeling so clearly. An excellent piece of writing on a subject that's hard for a man to admit, let alone talk about. Be glad of this -- you have a tiny part, if only that. Some men blunder into mounds of gold and don't recognize it, cast it away. Others may find a tiny nugget, but they know and treasure it. You're one of those. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Michael, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your dearest friend is so fortunate to have you close to her heart as you are what brings her much joy! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Martie, Tell my wife that. LOL! Thanks! Dixie, Much appreciated! Nancy, She's a great lady, it is my wish that everyone had such a friend. Thank you and hugs back. ThisDiamond, I do thank you for reading. Linda, Good advice, Thank you. Hugs in return. Chris, The same could be said of you. You're a great lady. Hugs, my friend. Julie, I'm glad you liked this, thanks so much for reading. Ratleader, Even a tiny part of such a beautiful soul is enough to make me feel very rich and much blessed. Thank you for reading and for your kind words. They're greatly appreciated. Noah, Your responses always give me such a big smile. Thank you, good friend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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