Open Poetry #26 |
Siddartha's River |
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Stay with me awhile and sitting by Siddartha's river we'll listen to the water whisper answers we need not seek |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now THIS... I can do... shhhhhhhh |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*leaning back on one elbow* I'm here. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Looking up "Siddartha's river", sounds like my kind of place.Silence, a drink, and a peaceful acceptance. Jason |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
As I recall, Siddartha spent his life searching for truth and understanding. Perhaps it is as simple as listening to a river with a friend. Enjoyed this! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is so peaceful Raph...I'm there! Maree |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This highly appealing poem is spiritually meaningful and very comforting...Lovely, Raph! Peace, Love, & Eternal Light, EA |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks for reading Karilea Thanks Dixie Siddartha is the protganist of Herman Hesse's novel by the same name. His work has touched me deeply and I suggest all his work especially Narcissus and Goldmun, Siddartha, Demian and Steppenwolf. That he did Martie as have many of us, few take the time to listen in silence Glad to have you aboard Maree Thank you Linda sort of a counter balance to my earlier post |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph: . . . hands behind head not listening to a thing . . . This is beautiful amazing - as always - like you xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, this is such a peaceful and serene poem. I love it!!! Hugs, Ethel |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Something about knowing the answers "we need not seek" That is too true. Good thinking you~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes...serenity. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sue thanks means alot to me pass the sunscreen Thanks Ethel glad you did hugs Blues we spend so much time on things we want forgetting things we need Thanks for reading enchanted one |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . you bringing the cooler? hehe I know . . . TY too xxoo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh Raffaele this is a beautiful invitation ... may our hair grow while we dive deep into silence and let treasures unfold .... I also love all of Hesse's works, especially Siddharta and Narcissus and Goldmund. Abbracci. Margherita |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Tou poetry always grabs the reader and amkes them think! |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
trying to relax those voices in my head keep disturbing me lol good write raph |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
yes Sue canadian beer not that p*** water you yanks call beer grin Grazie Margherita, I think Demian is underrated and being a short story doesn't get the attention it deserves that said I've always loved it for the parallels with my own life though Narcissus and Goldmun is sheer poetry Thanks Brad as does yours! Dream Mine too that's why I'm inviting people to catch anything I may miss ..grin |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Does the word "skunk" ring a bell? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Yes american beer and irish w...ah nevermind |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Shhhhhhhh...patience, my child, now what do you hear? The Word of Life, Ohm! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You just keep getting better and better with your deep simplicity...less is obviously more from your pen. I love the last two lines and am adding this to the rest of your poems already saved in my library. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Noah peace my friend Melissa you humble me with your replies, too kind |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I had to come back to this one...I need to be in the place described. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Stay with me awhile and sitting by Siddartha's river we'll listen to the water whisper answers we need not seek zenspeak at its finest.........all begins and ends in the same place.......... insightful words |
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Ishmael Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 51 |
VERY nice write Ish |
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