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DozenRoses4UV
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since 2003-06-03

Posts 16

0 posted 2003-06-03 10:49 PM

Hi Everyone,

A friend of mine has talked me into posting this. Now be gentle on me as this is my first ever. To me it is awful but hopefully in time I will improve. However, I was sitting at lunch today and I just got the strong urge to get out pen and paper and just start writing and this is what came out. Needless to say my friend is happy that I did this.

~Little Girl~
Drawings
House Designs
Poems
Spelling
What happen?
When did it leave?
Child
Smart
Loving
Willing
Where did she go?
She's not gone
but she is not here.
Can she surface?
Will she prevail?

[This message has been edited by DozenRoses4UV (06-03-2003 10:54 PM).]

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-03 10:51 PM

Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-06-03 10:54 PM

I'm glad you decided to post it

welcome

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-06-03 10:56 PM

quote:
and I just got the strong urge to get out pen and paper

Might anyone here think of any better excuse to answer the urge of a muse? I think not! Welcome to Passions, Rose...and please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2003-06-03 10:59 PM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry, Roses...

Your poem is a fine introspective piece, and surely makes your readers look within themselves as well...

PiP is a wonderful place - Settle in and make yourself comfortable - You'll love it here...

...

[This message has been edited by Nan (06-03-2003 11:00 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-06-04 03:45 AM

(smiles) That little girl is shining deep in your heart, where innocence and joy will always sing as the grace of a woman will move with her too, yay, God Bless You, always sing with the girl in your heart! This is a gorgeous debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your beautiful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-06-04 03:48 AM

Welcome to Passions!

I'm looking forward to more of your writings.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-06-04 03:55 AM

Roses, I really liked this poem and am looking forward to reading more of your work. I'm so glad that you decided to post it. Tell you friend thank you for us.
Welcome to Passions In Poetry!!
Hugs

Ethel....garysgirl

Sunshine

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Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-06-04 12:53 PM

I don't think everyone has had a chance to see this just yet...

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

DozenRoses4UV
Junior Member

since 2003-06-03

Posts 16

9 posted 2003-06-04 01:36 PM

Hi Friends,

I want to thank you all from the bottom of my heart for your kind words and your warm welcomes. My friend is right, you all are very sweet and this is a nice home.

I have emailed each of you separately but I wanted to Thank you all as a group as well.

Your encouragement to keep writing is awsome and I will keep trying.

Thanks again,
DozenRoses4UV

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2003-06-04 06:14 PM

Roses

Welcome to Passions...I hope you listen to the urge to write more often...it can be most rewarding.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

11 posted 2003-06-04 06:30 PM

WELCOME!
yes, grab pen and paper and let that 'child' prevail

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

12 posted 2003-06-04 06:54 PM

Hey 12 Roses? Sometimes...we can get a bit wild and wooley...so watch it with that "sweet stuff"...

[besides, if we let the guys think they're sweet? They start acting all mushy and silly and start writing romantic poems...]

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

13 posted 2003-06-04 07:03 PM

The firs thing in accomplishing anything is making the first step. You did good. Love, Joyce

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

14 posted 2003-06-06 01:26 PM

Well, lookie here at this warm welcome.
What did I tell ya?...this is an awesome place!
I'm REALLY glad that you chose to start writing
again and especially that you decided to join us here.
This is just TOO COOL!
Welcome to the 'family', my friend!
Love and hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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