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Moment's Song
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Moment's Song |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind 
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Moment's Song moment's once had forever gone, makes for the perfect country song, don't mention my mother or even the truck, has nothing to do with life's bad luck, no rain, and no trains shall be in the picture, as another sad country song becomes just but a fixture, dancing thru the moment's some good and some bad, weighing the difference's that made love sad, sometimes the smiles over takes the frowns, some good moments country song sweet sounds, moment's once had forever gone, makes for the perfect country song. . . . . Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (06-02-2003 01:52 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you got that song right! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, good song, Bernie... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good song...great write Bernie! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I write a lot of songs and I have to say that's a good summation. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
thank you all, was just having fun this morning, and i was listening to country music. didn't realize that what i was saying in this would really have any meaning to anyone but me... Of course since posted i've been to the jazz station, the classic rock station,, and oh no now the oldies.. Thanks again all Bernie opps forgot my  'lyA smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (06-03-2003 01:27 AM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bernie Ya gotta love a country song...at least I do. Enjoyed this! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely thought and written,,,, QjQ |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Beautiful. Brings a sad smile to my eyes to see a country song I can actually identify with. The perfect country song is an understatement, my good sir. Love the poetry. Hope to read more of this beauty. New Member, yv |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
dancing thru the moment's some good and some bad, weighing the difference's that made love sad, enjoyed your words and you are right, it makes for a county song  M Thanks for the "good luck" |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful piece, nicely written. I am not one for country music but each to their own Julie "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
country music is depressing, too depressing even for me. |
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