Open Poetry #26 |
run light run |
Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
I ran so far into the night Trying to get as far as I could Away from the light Light shows the scars and fears Let that all stay inside I cried Let them all live away Don’t shine a light inside Run yes run Into the night Stay away stay away Piercing light [This message has been edited by Goodknight (06-02-2003 07:48 PM).] |
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22NICK22 Member
since 2003-05-29
Posts 54 |
We're all strangers in the night... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Haunting thoughts here Paul.. It is SO great to read your words once again!! Good stuff m'friend. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul...sometimes the scars and fears when seen in the light, don't seem so bad. Lots of emotional pull in this poem, my friend...I hope all is well with you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) You know, over the years I have learning something, and that is even if you can't see the scars in the darkness, you can still feel them! (sigh) Sometimes looking at them isn't so bad, but if you don't crawl out of the dark a solution may never be made and the remedy sometimes has to come through understanding! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I offer you angel hope hugs in helping these fears diminish, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have suc a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
If we dont look at our scars in the light we can never fix them facing fears is the best way to over come them. Great piece, well expressed Julie "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
me too |
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