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Open Poetry #26

Hell on Earth (dedicated to ThunderMage)

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-06-02 02:52 PM

This poem is not about me. It is what my Liam is going through.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Why must I live
In this personal hell
Called my life

My Dad is like
The slave driver in hell
Why does he treat me this way
His slave

He is so lazy
I am online with my girlfriend
And he keeps asking me
To grab him a beer
And walk Marcie
Our dog

Just this morning
I woke up to my
Internet deactivated
Oh how I hate him sometimes
This person I call Dad

He does anything
I mean anything
To make me has unhappy
As I can possibly be

This is like
I am living in my own
Personal
Hell on Earth

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

1 posted 2003-06-02 08:58 PM

How true it all is. But then, that's when I take him to DigiWorld and show of my Thunder Blast and Quantom Fireball attacks.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

2 posted 2003-06-02 08:59 PM

Too the point and very touching. Simply stated, the truth is brilliance, and you, my dear, exude such truth. Hope to read more of your works.

New Member,
yv

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

3 posted 2003-06-02 10:17 PM

Fathers can be a pain in the butt sometimes, I know mine was growing up, but now since leaving home we have a different relationship one of more friendship which is wonderful

Nicely expressed

Julie

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-03 03:01 AM

I used to hate my father, now I sound just like him.

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