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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

0 posted 2003-04-23 03:01 AM

I recall
perfection
embedded
deep within
soil
rich

The birds
they sang
for me

There alone
but not
within my garden

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Please see Nightshades beautiful work which
inspired me so . . .thank you

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-04-23 05:34 AM

thanks for the link, I had missed it...both are wonderful writings and I can see you've been given a very passionate inspiration!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-04-23 06:51 AM

Sue, this is a very beautiful poem.
I'm glad that you were inspired by
Chris's poem.

And, friend, you will have another garden one day.

Hugs,
Ethel

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Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-04-23 08:40 AM

This is beautiful Sue..
Amazing how we are inspired by another's work here.
Lovely..just lovely.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2003-04-23 09:14 AM

Sue, I am honoured that my little piece of thought inspired you to write such a lovely post. Beautiful !! Thankyou. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-04-23 12:21 PM

Beautiful Sue, I loved both of them they both inspire. Yours was short and sweet..hey kind of like you grin

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2003-04-23 12:39 PM

littlewing - you have to pretty a smile not to have a rose garden...

BC

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

7 posted 2003-04-23 04:33 PM

"There alone
but not
within my garden "

Wow, love this.
Jason

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2003-04-23 07:22 PM

Beautiful!
Eric

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

9 posted 2003-04-23 07:33 PM

Sue, this was lovely and a compliment to Chris.

Hugs, Marti

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2003-04-23 08:02 PM

You have such a unique way of expressing yourself--and so poetically!

Warm hugs,
EA

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

11 posted 2003-04-24 09:03 PM

nicr write

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

12 posted 2003-04-26 04:37 AM

Thank you Everyone - but the real thanks goes to Chris - for writing such a beautiful poem

TY Chris - truly and everyone for reading xxoo

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

13 posted 2003-05-01 11:14 PM

(smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, yay, I love birds soooooooo much and their beautiful songs always make my heart sing in joy! (kiss on cheek) Chris always writes soooooooo beautifully as you do, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

14 posted 2003-05-02 06:22 PM

Thanks Noah!

as do you -
*smiling*
so sweet you are
xxoo

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