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Short awaking
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Short awaking |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) 
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Sweet dreams never seems waking up unfinished thought close eyes try again |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I liked this, Thomas |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh, that they could be recaptured. Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thomas that's just so true, well said. Yes surely we often try again!! Almost never succeeding! Thank you. Love, Margherita |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
Oh man - I never CAN go back to the good ones, but let me tell you, if I've got some crazy serial killer on my rear, or if a tornado is after me, I won't wake up until after I'm already toast, you know? *sigh* My dreams suck, and these little lines of yours are FANTASTIC! Gosh you've evoked some "been there, done that" from people!  Amazing work with so few words! BRAVO!~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
I forgot to add, I know this wasn't suppose to make me *giggle* but it did. Those last four little words just sounded so "innocent and sweet" from a man like you. HA! Great read!!! |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Man like me? Oh the Rogue  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thomas: this is brilliant! hehe looking at your critique message I used to live in neverneverland when I first came here . . . xxoo |
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