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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Mortal remains fading roots Within a ring of fire the dance resumes . . . I beg of you enslave my madness Rotting roses permeate my garden bower Deliver me my Savior I am dying on the vine |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Within a ring of fire the dance resumes . . . Don't let the maddness overtake you, trust me, it doesn't get you too far. Hang in there sweet tweety~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You truly are a talented writer! Your poetry moves me--and all over the place at that! I always know I'm in for an emotional ride. I won't let you die on the vine, dear precious one! I'm on my way with a pitcher full of angelic nutrients to put the tweet back in your tweeter! Warm embrace and loving blessings, EA |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
You are definitely too vibrant to die on the vine. I too, enjoy your talent. This is wonderful, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing We are all dying on the vine. LOL  Well done |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bluesy: I do trust you - thank you EA - so very sweet - an emotional ride - oops - is that what I do? hehehe - please send that water UPS - thank you Pat - thank you - so very sweet - arent we all though? SY - you said it! Thanks guys xxoo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dark thoughts, but very beautifully expressed ... I am in need of fresh roses' fragrance! When the silt is burned ... nature - gratefully - showers us with beauty again ... may Nature's renewal brighten your thoughts. Hugs. Margherita  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I think you are much too young to 'die on the vine.' Hang in there. Help is on it's way ... Hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
The dancing of root in ossoary dank pierces and lifts the ring to release A plea is heard faint within the aroma of rose captured madness is loosed within bower'd glade You are soon delivered Redemption is nigh Your savior is you You live in the wine So there! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - before a vine will claim one like you, I would pluck the vine and serve you a bouquet of wine... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write...much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Margherita - thank you I needed that wish may it come back to you aplenty Marti - thank you - young in age/old in soul Ed - I cannot even begin to thank you for such beautiful words Made me smile - truly and if anyone knows it is you that what I look for is me . . . thank you from my heart That meant a lot to me (so there yourself) Bill - so so utterly sweet to me thank you - your heart is showing but then - it always does Nancy - thank you - always love to see you reading me Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-23-2003 03:24 AM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You know I like them dark but I'd rather see you smile. Hugs loved this |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Raph - *smile* hugs back [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-24-2003 05:16 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow, that's pretty dark and depressing...look up to the sun lady, let it shine down on you because you look good in light. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
mmmmmmmmm tasty your writing is getting powerful love these lines as for the feeling? hug |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Dixie - thank you - so sweet - I know - sometimes need to let the dark out Bri - thank you - means a lot coming from you *curtsey* - thank you hugs back xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-24-2003 05:15 PM).] |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I love your writing I find myslef looking for it more and more |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Dark...powerful... and I liked it alot !! Regards, Olias. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh my!! This one is a  and going directly into my library! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oops...hee hee....forgot to click the library thingy..hee hee  |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
You are too young to be concerned with dying...now get out and live! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Roots grown deep deny the dry seasons withering... hmmm.... I think not, much to much life in these words to be in wither... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
gee i loved this write, it had a lot of good wording "one needs not challenge all the players to win the game" |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
As usual you have enraptured me in your words.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is very heartfelt, sweet friend, I too have felt myself hanging on the thread and my heart sends angel hugs your way that you will always soar and never fall away! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brad - wow - thank you so much Olias - nice to see you reading me - TY Chris - thank you so very much - cool Ron - so very sweet - thank you so much Q - awesome - glad you liked Thomas - you are still jumping - aren't you tired yet lol thank you Al - thank you so very much (jumping along with Thomas) Noah - thank you so much for relating - great - I love angels . . . Thanks guys xxoo |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I didnt see this as dark made me want to grab a bottle of wine & toast one of my favorite writers on another excellent write |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
dream - you are so very sweet to me thank you xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Dix - missed you . . . [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-01-2003 08:17 AM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Sue, i think this has got to be one of my favourites of yours. you sent tingles down my spine gal! lots of love, gemma xxxxxx |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Such clearly drawn emotion. I hope it was a moment which has passed. Thank you for sharing this. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
when old roots fade..new ones pop up..keep writing |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - you are a most talented writer, as I've mentioned before. And now your writings are more with you than they have ever been. Hang in there lady with a smile... BC |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
littlewing, even as your petals wither and fall, they will always be renewed with new and fragrant blooms. I’m glad someone bumped this one, it is really nice. Very nice write littlewing! Richy |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is a very intense write. I always know I'm in for a treat when I open your poems. It's good to see you back. I missed you. Hugs  Ethel |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful, Sue! You say so much with so few words. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So happy to have this come back again...I missed my chance at reply last time. Powerful write...You have tremendous talent and insight. Wonderous choice of words Littlewing...TD |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
jim morrisons successor.cutting and incisive. great poetry. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Its my little wing!! my sad little wing... :- / that can't be right.. you'll need to smile again real fast, please (though you are really good at this dark writing). so much emotion here. Well done Always, Alyssa |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sue, I've missed you too... |
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