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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2003-05-31 06:37 PM



Nocturnal, my dear,
always nocturnal..

These thoughts in twilight dare
to roam the fields of midnight new
searching for those moments
in the night of our rapt tenderness
when we hold in all the love
and breathe it into our memories.
The night...our one rose of peace.
The sweet essence of its beauty
flowing into our days.
As we grow hour by hour
closer to our eternity,
to the embrace of angels' wings.

We reach for each other
in the cocoon of tangled sheets
viewing each other with the eyes
of knowing, with the vision
of our fragility. Remembering
that love goes on and on. Even though
we may be in a lasting sleep,
our spirits soar; then make the leap.

And so it's true...
we are nocturnal, my dear,
always nocturnal.


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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-05-31 06:38 PM


This was beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2003-05-31 07:31 PM


Ivy Rose - yes we are, always nocturnal. Romantic write...

BC

Kethry
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3 posted 2003-05-31 07:45 PM


Interesting touch of the macabre, while yet being sensual.
Kethry

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4 posted 2003-05-31 07:48 PM




(sigh) Oh Ivy, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your heart always shines with spirits and sensuality that seem to light the moon with electricity! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-06-01 02:37 AM


yep! a beautiful write
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6 posted 2003-06-01 12:27 PM


Keeping this one, and will revisit it...
tonight. Enjoyed the first read very much.

Goldenrose
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7 posted 2003-06-02 12:24 PM


fantastic imagery, i love the nocturnal world.especialy the one you write about.thank you.


Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2003-06-02 12:36 PM


IvyRose~
I really enjoyed this~

It seemed so surroundingly surreal~
A GREAT write ... a wonderful read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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